Thứ Sáu, 30 tháng 10, 2009

The scene of my family on weekend

*Outline
*Thesis statement:
My family are very crowed, full of smiles and interesting activities on the weekend.
*Body paragraph1:
- Topic sentence: in the morning is often very busy with preparing the meal.
-controlling sentences:
+ My mother usually gets up early to prepare breakfast for us; my sister also gets up to help my mother. I oversleep until seven o’clock I wake up. All kinds of dishes were put on the table already waiting my father and sibling.
+My family sits together around the table to have the breakfast. My parents talk to us about interesting things, tell some humorous stories in the meal make me feel happy.
+I really like mother’s fried eggs, it is delicious. When I eat it, I can smell of its flavor, garlic, onion, chili, oil ... I am addicted so much that I always tell my mother to make it for me in almost of morning. Even while I am sleeping, I can feel. It is my favorite food.
+ After finishing breakfast, my father sits on sofa to read newspaper and watch television. And my mother is relaxed with baby cat. She is very beloved it and take good care of it such as washing, combing, cleaning...and she sometimes takes it to go for a walk in the park nearby my home.
+ My father is a very strict person but he does love my sibling and my mother. Although he is very busy with work in the company, he tries to spend his weekend with family. He never absent on the weekend.
+ My sister cleans the house, my brother helps father with the program computer and I help mother cut grass in the garden. We are with our own work make scene of my family noisy, happy look like the Tet holiday.
+Sometimes my mother takes me to go the market to by food for lunch. The market is not far from my home, it only takes me about ten minutes to go there.
-conclusion sentence:. The time seems to go very quickly in the morning. So, preparing the meal is the main activity of my family in the morning.
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*Body paragraph2:
-Topic sentence: it is sparer than in the afternoon.
-Topic sentences:
+ My father often takes the whole family to my grandmother’s house. I am very happy to visit her because I very miss her.
+ I love her so much, whenever I see her, I feel something wonderful in her characteristics and appearance, the eyes are sharp ,she has a fair complexion and hair is black and smooth make her beautiful. I want to sit into warm hand and kiss on the pink cheek of her.
+ My grandmother tells many kinds of jokes make me laugh a lot. I am so funny that I reluctant to come back home.
+The rest of time on the weekend, my family only does some chores. After dinner, my parents watch the news on the TV and talk together. And siblings return room and continue works for tomorrow.
- Conclusion sentence:
+ I am very tired but my heart is very happy.
*conclusion paragraph:
Weekend helps me relax and think through any problem. I feel refresh and ready to begin anything-including those awful exams. Moreover, it is the sweetest moment to gather and share everything with family.





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Thứ Sáu, 23 tháng 10, 2009

The value of friendship

A: Introduction :
Have you ever imagined that if there is no friend in your life and how is your life? What will you do when you encounter with complicated and difficult problems? I’m sure that you will fell so sad if no one stands by to share and to help you. Even you will be failed painfully. You always find it so boring in life. There is a famous saying that “sorrow shared is sorrow halved and joy shared is joy doubled”. Our pleasures will be lost a half without friends share them. So, friendship plays an important role in our life.
* Outline for body and conclusion paragraph:
*Topic sentence : Friendship is very necessary for us in life. We can’t live without friend; also we can’t survive without water
+ when we meet trials and tribulations, friend is the first person stand by to help , to share and to comfort us.
+Friends are the same age as us. Therefore, we will find it easy to confide anything. Moreover, they can understand us more than anyone else. A good fried is a great source of consolations and comfort in our troubles
+The life with so many difficulties, challenges and complex things which we can’t solve them by ourselves. But if there are a lot, a lot of friends around us, they will give us much more strong, power to defeat them easily.
+There are also many choices which make us reluctant or can not decide something good to do. Maybe we will make a wrong decision. But if there is friend help to give us some right advice, we can select truly.
+wherever friends go with us or whenever we need a help so, we will never feel lonely or boring, or scared anything
* Conclusion: who has a friend is has a big treasure. So, we should keep what friends we have. We do not hurt our friend’s feeling. We live to help together and make this life more meaningful
B: SHORT ESSAY
Have you ever imagined that if there is no any friend in your life and how your life is? What will you do when you encounter with complicated and difficult problems? I’m sure that you can no succeed if no one stands by to share and help you. Even you will be failed painfully. You always find it boring in your life and want to give up everything. There is a famous saying that “sorrow shared is sorrow halved and joy shared is joy doubled”. Our pleasures will be lost a half without friends share them. So, friendship plays an important role in our life all the time.
Friendship is always necessary for our life all the ages. We can not live without friend; also we can not survive without water. As you know, when we are born until we become an adult, we usually meet trials and tribulations. To be successful, we have to make efforts and do its best. However, we will not be strong enough to do that. This means we need to have many people stand by to help us such as, our family, relatives, and friends. Among them, friends will be the most important person can help us. In fact, Friends are the same age as us. That is why we will find it easy to confide and share anything. And they can understand us more than anyone else. A good friend is a great source of consolations and comfort in our troubles. Moreover, the life with so many difficulties, challenges and complex things which we can’t solve them by ourselves. But if there are a lot of friends around us, they will give us much more strong, belief, confidence to defeat them easily. Sometimes, there are also many choices which make us reluctant or can not decide something good to do in life. Maybe we will make a wrong decision and it is not useful for us. But if there are friends help to give us some right advice, we can select truly. No matter what where we go what we do and when we need, our friend will appear in time to save us. Therefore, we will never fell lonely or scared anything. And friendship is a great source of encourages that can not lack in our life.
Who has a friend is has a big treasure. So, we should keep what friends we have. We do not hurt our friend’s feeling. We live to help together and make this life more meaningful.

Thứ Sáu, 16 tháng 10, 2009

THE MID_AUTUMN FESTIVAL

THE MID_AUTUMN FESTIVAL

INTRODUCTION Paragraph1 :

Today is mid- autumn festival.the atmosphere seems interesting and comfortable. After finishing dinner, my roomates and me took to go for walk together in the park. There were a lot of people came here to enjoy this interesting sightseeing. We walked around for a while and then we found out a blend to sit down. While i was looking up the sky to see the moonlight, suddenly my heart felt so sad and missed about the last mid-autumn festival with my family at hometown.

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The value of friendship

Introduction paragraph 2:

Have you ever imagined that if there is no friend in your life and how is your life?.what will you do when you encouter with complicated and difficult problems?. I’m sure that you will fell so sad if no one stands by to share and to help you . Even you will be failed painfully.you always find it so boring in life. There is a famous saying that “sorrow shared is sorrow halved and joy shared is joy doubled”. Our pleasures will be lost a half without friends share them.so, friendship plays an important role in our life.

* Outline for body and conclusion paragraph:

*Friendship isvery neccessary for us in life. We can’t live without friend, also we can’t survive without water

* when we meet trials and tribulations, friend is the first person stand by to help , to share and to comfort us.

*Friends are the same age as us.therefore, we will find it easy to confide anything.moreover, they can understand us more than anyone else. A good fried is a great source of consolations and comfort in our troubles

* The life with so many difficulties, challenges and complex things which we can’t solve them by ourselves. But if there are a lot,a lot of friends around us, they will give us much more streng, power to defeat them easily.

*There are also many choices which make us reluctant or can not decide something good to do. Maybe we will make a wrong decision.but if there is friend help to give us some right advice, we can select truly.

*wherever friends go with us. Whenever we need a help. So, we will never feel lonely or boring,or exhausested or scared anything

*who has a friend is has a big treasure. So, we should keep what friends we have. We do not hurt our friend’s feeling. We live to help together and make this life more meaningful.