Thứ Sáu, 30 tháng 10, 2009

The scene of my family on weekend

*Outline
*Thesis statement:
My family are very crowed, full of smiles and interesting activities on the weekend.
*Body paragraph1:
- Topic sentence: in the morning is often very busy with preparing the meal.
-controlling sentences:
+ My mother usually gets up early to prepare breakfast for us; my sister also gets up to help my mother. I oversleep until seven o’clock I wake up. All kinds of dishes were put on the table already waiting my father and sibling.
+My family sits together around the table to have the breakfast. My parents talk to us about interesting things, tell some humorous stories in the meal make me feel happy.
+I really like mother’s fried eggs, it is delicious. When I eat it, I can smell of its flavor, garlic, onion, chili, oil ... I am addicted so much that I always tell my mother to make it for me in almost of morning. Even while I am sleeping, I can feel. It is my favorite food.
+ After finishing breakfast, my father sits on sofa to read newspaper and watch television. And my mother is relaxed with baby cat. She is very beloved it and take good care of it such as washing, combing, cleaning...and she sometimes takes it to go for a walk in the park nearby my home.
+ My father is a very strict person but he does love my sibling and my mother. Although he is very busy with work in the company, he tries to spend his weekend with family. He never absent on the weekend.
+ My sister cleans the house, my brother helps father with the program computer and I help mother cut grass in the garden. We are with our own work make scene of my family noisy, happy look like the Tet holiday.
+Sometimes my mother takes me to go the market to by food for lunch. The market is not far from my home, it only takes me about ten minutes to go there.
-conclusion sentence:. The time seems to go very quickly in the morning. So, preparing the meal is the main activity of my family in the morning.
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*Body paragraph2:
-Topic sentence: it is sparer than in the afternoon.
-Topic sentences:
+ My father often takes the whole family to my grandmother’s house. I am very happy to visit her because I very miss her.
+ I love her so much, whenever I see her, I feel something wonderful in her characteristics and appearance, the eyes are sharp ,she has a fair complexion and hair is black and smooth make her beautiful. I want to sit into warm hand and kiss on the pink cheek of her.
+ My grandmother tells many kinds of jokes make me laugh a lot. I am so funny that I reluctant to come back home.
+The rest of time on the weekend, my family only does some chores. After dinner, my parents watch the news on the TV and talk together. And siblings return room and continue works for tomorrow.
- Conclusion sentence:
+ I am very tired but my heart is very happy.
*conclusion paragraph:
Weekend helps me relax and think through any problem. I feel refresh and ready to begin anything-including those awful exams. Moreover, it is the sweetest moment to gather and share everything with family.





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